Sunday, November 17, 2013

That's What The Water Made Me






Has concluded.  Beth and Jon are moving on to My Most Beautiful Regret.
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It will post as a White Mic Diaries story - so please remember to follow that one as well. 
 
Thank you for reading, your comments - good and bad, and thanks for your support.
 
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5 comments:

  1. Well I think your making a mistake because there is still a lot of story here to tell but what do I know. And from what the beginning suggested I'm still confused at where the time frame is, were Dot and Beth ever friends like it said in the beginning, really confused as to the babies 1 or 2 if you go back and reread it just a lot of inconsistences then you seemed to chuck all that and went from there. That's why I asked you before. So it would of been nice to see where this all led and what happened with Dalton that's all in story form seeing that we stuck with you.

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  2. I look forward ro reading the next installment of this great story.

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  3. I have to say I'm surprised it is ending at this point in the story. I do have some unanswered questions as well which I hope will be addressed in the new story. Thanks for writing.

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  4. Where can I Found this story My Beautiful Regret?

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  5. Wow this was a Rolling coaster story, for Jon and Beth. I hope that Dalton
    Get what coming to him. I'm somewhat confused with this story.
    I hope the sequel who give me answers, I'm little confused with
    This story!

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